Tanka for Snow Moon Posted byruthpartridge28th February 2021Posted inUncategorizedTags:moon, poetry, tanka style White disc in the sky Marbled face like granite hewn Elegance alignedBalanced over moorland ridgePersonified by sunlightIn celestial orb unveil. Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #2: Ruth Partridge’s #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge! LikeLike Reply
I only wrote my first poem last April although I have been a teacher for 33 years ! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I wrote this a year ago – strange to see so many people reviewing it today LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Very nice… but I think this is not really according to the prompt which should be prose .. LikeLike Reply
Gorgeous lines – “Marbled face like granite hewn” – wow!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Ruth Partridge’s #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Lovely imagery in your words. ❤
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I only wrote my first poem last April although I have been a teacher for 33 years !
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And that’s wonderful. Your poetic urges have awakened! Welcome to the journey. ❤
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Thank-you I’m loving it
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Poetry is great at any age or stage of life. Have fun. ❤
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Gorgeous, Ruth!
-David
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Thank you so much
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I wrote this a year ago – strange to see so many people reviewing it today
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Wonderful writing, and Happy Valentines Day!
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Thanks so much
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Very nice… but I think this is not really according to the prompt which should be prose ..
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Reading the poem and then seeing the photo is a trip – you nailed this, Ruth!
-David
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Thankyou so much
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